The Kalevala (1)
January 29, 2016
The Kalevala is a sequence of folkloric songs, runes and charms from the Karelia region of Finland, collected in the field and concatenated into epic form by Dr. Elias Lonnrot (1803-1884). The versions presented here are not translations or transliterations — they are respectful bastardizations, working from the 1963 English version of the Kalevala produced by the versatile and witty Francis Peabody Magoun Jr.
A FAILED SEDUCTION
[being a bastardization of Rune 4
of The Kalevala, lines 1-56]
Goes a girl in the green gloom,
in the dim arcade of the wood.
It’s Aino, looking to left and to right,
in the dream of her maidenhood.
She’s looking for twig-brooms for
whisks and brushes, handy sprigs
Beskirted she is, beribboned so,
but nudely she nearly shines
in the radiance of her modesty
under the gloomy pines.
Glimmering Aino, adored by weeds,
number one with the heavy-headed
But wait. But wait.
An ancient voice violates the
“I am the eyes of the wood!” it says.
She stops, peers ahead.
In the groin of a tree, as green
there sits an old boy with his
His white hairs are waving,
electric with lust,
and the foam at his lips is forming
Who is this fellow?
Why, it’s distinguished Vainamoinen,
most potent of our bards!
You know — the singer whose
stop the boulders from butting
and the North from folding into
“You’re mine, girleen,” he nobly
“I won you fair and square. Ask your
“Joukahainen?” says Aino.
“That’s him. He bandied songs with
me so I stuffed him in a
He said if I unburied him I could
marry his sister.
And that’s you.”
“Where is my brother now?”
“Still picking the shitballs from
his hair, probably.
Come here. I am profoundly
Aino gasps. And from his tree-cleft
seductive Vainamoinen sings
“Sweet are your parts,
revealed to me
by the expertise of my lechery.
But sweeter still
than the strength of your thighs
is the NO that I see in your
For the wood will take you, Aino.
The wood will make you, Aino.
And soon, very soon,
you’ll be sighing, you’ll see,
for lichenous, lecherous me.”
Aino feels it: his encroaching magic.
His desire that lives in ditches.
His libido that trickles and itches.
She smells it: his old man’s breath.
Bog-suck and the outstretched
and the dawn leering over the
“Once was I the forest’s favourite,”
in her plain sweet butter-
“I had thought my life would travel
like a shepherd’s shout from a
to ring and curve in space.
But by the words you have spoken
from your grey-green perch
I am utterly and miserably
“The drip of the leaf is virtue’s thief,”
says beady old Vainamoinen.
Aino tears off her ribbons, pulls out
She flings aside her bright bangles.
“Of every girlish trapping I
Fly away innocence, fly away mental
And sobbing she rushes back to
“Aino!” calls out the suddenly weak
the warbling tree-wizard. “Aino!
Hold me tight and fear me not!
Together we’ll gnaw the long night
to a nubbin
and mount the wobbly trellis of
He is alone.
The weeping girl is gone from
and the farmyard receives her, busy
ALL INSTALLMENTS: INTRODUCTION: Laughter in the Womb of Time, or Why I Love the Kalevala | RUNE 1: “The Birth of Vainamoinen” | RUNE 2 (departure): “Vainamoinen in November” | RUNE 3 (1–278): “Wizard Battle” | RUNE 4 (1–56): “A Failed Seduction” | RUNE 4 (300–416): “Aino Ends It All” | RUNE 5 (45–139): “An Afternoon Upon the Water” | RUNE 5 (150–241): “The Blue Elk” | RUNE 5 (departure): “Smüt the Dog Praises His Seal Queen” | RUNE 6 (1–114): “Therapy Session” | RUNE 6 (115–130): “Joukahainen’s Mother Counsels Him Against Shooting the Wizard Vainamoinen” | RUNE 11 (1–138): “Introducing Kyllikki” | RUNE 17 (1–98): “The Dreaming Giant” | RUNE 23 (485–580): “The Bride’s Lament” | RUNE 30 (1–276): “Icebound” | RUNE 30 (120–188): “The Voyage of the Sea-Hare” (Part One) | RUNE 30 (185–188): “Losing It” | RUNE 30 (departure): “Across the Ice” | RUNE 30 (departure): “Song of the Guilty Viking” | RUNE 30 (departure): “The Witch’s Dance” | RUNE 31 (215–225): “The Babysitter” | RUNE 31 (223–300): “The Screaming Axe” | RUNE 33 (1–136): “The Cowherd” | RUNE 33 (73): “Song of the Blade: Kullervo” | RUNE 33 (reworked): “The Breaking of the Blade” | RUNE 33 (118–284): “The Cows Come Home” | RUNE 34 (1–82): “The Pipes of Kullervo” | RUNE 45 (259–312, departure): “The Wizard’s Secret”.
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